Jan. 15th, 2018

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I got this via kindle unlimited. I saw a somewhat favorable review on SBTB, but I am not sure I would have bought the thing — via kindle unlimited, it is a no brainer. If you don’t like it, it just goes back.

I did not realize until _after_ I had finished it that it was a KKR book. It’s less clear to me whether I would have read it, had I realized that at the beginning, but I’m going to review this the way I was going to review it before realizing who the author was, and then explain how that might have impacted my initial decision to read or not.

The book opens with the woman lead dragging her victim / target / assignment’s dead body towards an airlock and being flummoxed by the airlock. She wants to dump the body without setting off the Cruise Ship In Space’s alarm, and is having trouble. The man lead shows up, chatty and funny, and proceeds to commit fire alarm mayhem: he opens the lock, dumps the body, then drags the woman around while chattily acting drunk and setting off multiple other airlock alarms on multiple levels. Security finds them, fines him, and they head off to the lounge to be conspicuously boozy and sexy with each other before then going to his magnificent suite to have actual sexy times. It becomes clear (first person perspective alternating) that he remembers her from when they were young but she doesn’t remember him.

Breakfast is a little rocky, and she leaves in a huff, and things go downhill from there. She eventually figures out Who He Really Is, and extended chase around the sector ensues. She meets up with her “heart brother” to ask him to look into this guy’s background. He stumbles across his ex. He eventually confronts her at her apartment door when she orders robot takeout. Lots of backstory is revealed. “Heart brother” comes through with the goods on the guy. There is more antics about possible assignments she could take, one of which she really doesn’t want to take and he really wants her to take and not fulfill on.

Then it is off on another Cruise Ship in Space to that assignment, where his ex- pops up, acts like a complete bitch on wheels, the quite obvious setup is deployed, a variety of people get shot but don’t die, one person’s necks is quite spectacularly broken, and then epilogue.

What’s bad: very thin cast of characters. Space is apparently a very empty place. In addition to the people who are going to have sex with each other, and the people who want to have sex with her and she declines and the woman who used to have sex with him and Wow She Really Is Not a Nice Person, there are basically an extremely short list of briefly met coworkers and the foster brother dude. That’s it. And it sounds like more than it really is, basically. Honestly, the woman character’s interaction with the woman in security is a fairly substantial scene in this book, which gives you a sense of just how limited the characters and their interaction really is.

What’s good: moves super fast. Not too angsty. Fun stuff. Competence porn. Downside of the competence porn is that he is such an idiot. His opinion of her changes wildly from one moment to the next, mostly because he fails to understand what he is seeing, which leads this reader a little baffled. Is she actually chaotic and a troublemaker and he is just basically making excuses for her? Is she actually Really Fucking Brilliant and he just fails to appreciate her for a while? I think this is supposed to be layered / complex characterization. It does not work very well for me.

While I did kind of get a kick out of the description of her apartment, it seemed wildly implausible that an assassin would really live in a place like that. But, you know, I don’t know any actual assassins so what do I know. One thing I will note about assassin characters in general: you just don’t see them actually doing the deed very often if ever (you see her kill, but I don’t think you see him kill; and her one on screen kill is not a paid for job). (I know there are exceptions to this rule, but this book is not one of them).

I also found his successful grab with the robot takeout to be implausible. But, whatever. That’s not really what this book was about.

I also felt like the psychological trauma backstory for her was inadequately resolved. Altho it _does_ go a long way to explaining her basic psychopathy (his is adequately explained right from the beginning).

Yes, I get that they are not really psychopaths, because they are way too good at reading other people’s emotions and at planning ahead to truly be psychopaths.

OK. How does the author identity fit into this? First, the fun romp, chase sequences, sexy times, etc. are all very KKR. That’s the good part of what you get from her books. Second, the inadequately handled technical details and the woefully under handled trauma backstory are also part of what I remember from reading her years and years and years ago. And yes, the feeling that there just wasn’t much _to_ the whole story is also very KKR. All that said, she’s really honed her craft over the years, and I will keep her and this series in mind for when I am looking for this particular kind of quick romp of a read novel in the future.

ETA: Book number 6.
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OK, bought this because I saw an ad on SBTB, and boy, I won't be doing that again. Poor choices! At a third of the way in, I started turning pages as quickly as I could. At halfway through, I was really wondering why I was continuing, but figured, meh, it'll deliver an HEA. At 3/4s of the way through, I said to myself, Self, this is the first entry in a trilogy, and I haven't read a review I trust of this thing to ensure an HEA or even a satisfying holding point at the end of book one. Let's go look.

Nope. Nope. Nope. Nope. Goodreads review by someone I don't know a thing about is the only indicator I can find of someone even finishing the book, and that person said "vicious cliffhangar". Yeah. Nope. Nope. Nope. Nopity Nope.

Things wrong with this book.

Main male protagonist / love interest / wtf experiencing stress and tension goes off to vision [ETA: don't know what happened there -- should have been "visit"] a pleasure droid. He comes three times. When he is finally done, he notices he has completely destroyed the droid.

Earth is cold. The scientists who fixed global warming overshot. Core temperature is said to be dropping to a point incompatible with life. This is in universe with multiple species AND the ability to terraform. First, don't know what core temp has to do with anything -- average ocean temp would seem to be the relevant metric. Second, can't you fix this with terraforming? Seriously?

We have some strong female characters. Evil Mom. Evil Mom's genetically modified minions. The heroine, who is daughter to Evil Mom. Someone who gives Evil Agent of Evil mom a blow job and is later shot by him. Another genetically modified woman who can't touch anyone without poisoning them to death. Another woman who seems to be Special, but turns out to be another Evil Agent of Evil Mom.

Some discussion among politicians about the underclasses and their reproduction and or death rates. None of that makes any sense at all.

The word "patent" is used as synonymous with "that's how corporations make tons of money". To be fair, I'm sensitive to this, because this trope has been showing up in romance novels / series in SF skin. But *shudder*. Patents != money. Come on, people.

Why is there no food anywhere?

How can you have space travel, but not be able to keep habitable parts of earth warm?

Why didn't everyone move to the equator? Etc.

I could go on. But why would I? Also, why does Evil Mom think daughter would be willing to be her bodyguard? Why are people focused on getting transit to a single replacement planet for Earth, rather than on getting a decent array of functioning colonies going? Why why why? Also, fix Earth?

So I'm stopping at 3/4s. Because I'm sure as hell not signing up for the next book in this series, and this one is ending on a cliffhanger anyway. Next time, I will NOT buy based on an ad at SBTB, but instead wait for a review.

ETA: I might have been influence by comparisons of this to Rachel Bach. Don't you fall for that crap. Bach is fun. This is Not Fun.

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